Friday, 14 November 2014

My Brother- By Bianca

This morning Ryan said he would kill me. I said ''that's not what brothers do''. But mum came and yelled'' go to your room! then Ryan screamed "no.' '' Then, Mum chased him. She got him and mum put him in his room.



Written and typed by Bianca- Check out all the punctuation she typed by herself!

2 comments:

  1. Great use of words binky, as for your brother he has learnt his mother can run faster, he will choose his words more wisely!

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  2. A great story. I love your punctuation. think I saw your great singing in the Earthquake Song too. Mrs Teddy

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